OUTRIDER'S & MIDNIGHT BLUE'S
SPECIAL STAR AWARD
To us, good fanfic is REAL writing.
We believe all authors who take pride in their craft feel the same way.
Yet there are a few fannish conventions that cling to a lot of fanfic,
even some of the best. The alternating name syndrome is one
of those. That is, a story alternates between
first and last names when referring to a character even within the same
pov. For example: Chris knocked the shotgun out of the man's hand
before he could fire at Vin and Buck. Before his cohort could fire
on Larabee, Wilmington and Tanner put twin bullets in his chest.
Stephen King and Elizabeth George don't find it necessary to do this.
Nor does any other popular profic author you can think of. Although
we've talked to some truly excellent fanfic writers who employ this device
we still haven't gotten a really satisfactory reason for such an unnecessary
and often irritating convention. The usual reason given is "variety."
However, just read some of the award winning stories marked with a star
below and ask if it's ever necessary to risk having a new reader think
there are 14 main characters in this fandom. We do notice that the
best writers, the ones featured in our awards, generally alternate much
more subtly than do the writers of lesser skill who feel compelled to avoid
using the same name for a character twice in a row.
Of course, we aren't
referring here a change in the way one man refers to another when the change
is done for a reasons such as emphasis. Buck might use the name Chris
90% of the time but use Larabee when he's pissed. Ezra, of course,
called the men by their last names about a third of the time, their first
names about two thirds, even alternating in consecutive sentences for purposes
that had more to do with his endearing pretension than variety or emphasis. |